Happiness is fleeting

Sara Storkson


Notice of absence from Sara Storkson
Hey guys,
Due to some unforseen personal stuff I will be gone for awhile.

"She touched me
It made me quiver
I wanted to explore every crevice
every contour
Our lips touched
Thighs met
We became one
and
In the moment we were free"

  • Author: Sara Storkson (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 23rd, 2017 00:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: This was a personal experience that was wonderful but ended too quickly. Its not my best work but it means the most to me.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 45
  • Users favorite of this poem: Michael Edwards, FredPeyer, Sara Storkson
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  • Michael Edwards

    Commenting against another poem today I wrote 'Perfect'. I repeat it again here 'Perfect' and into favourites.

    • Sara Storkson

      Thank you so much! This means the absolute world to me. So much so I teared up.♡

      • Michael Edwards

        Well deserved Sara

      • dusk arising

        Wow compact but with excitement lust and power.... really exciting i keep reading it.

      • FredPeyer

        Sara, you said it all, you evoked the right feelings, used the right words. You are a great writer!
        Has to go into favorites

      • FredPeyer

        PS: Don't know why exactly, but somehow you brought Charles Bukowski to my mind.

        • Sara Storkson

          That's what I was going for.
          I'm so estatic right now!
          Thank you so much

          • FredPeyer

            Charles Bukowski is my all time favorite poet. One of these days I will try to write something in his honor.



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