You vs You

Lakiea

Self why do you battle with me

Self why do you doubt yourself

Self I see so much potential in you but you don't see it

Self you see what you think is unbelievable

But self I see so much growth each day

Self will you ever accept you

Self will you ever feel the life in you

Self will you ever realize your smile brightens up someone day

Self will you ever realize your eyes and thoughts are beyond of what you can't see

Self I need you to do some reflection

That peacock, that ladybug, that butterfly is "You"

 

Lakiea.M.Green

 

*lgsl*

  • Author: Lakiea (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 23rd, 2017 09:35
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Thanks LAKIEA ~ Love the Structure of your poem ~ elegant flowing "free verse" Love the Subject too ~ our Alter Ego ~ our inner (sometimes hidden) SELF. As we leave the teenage years behind and progress into our 29's & 30's Men are filled with doubt and sometimes despair ~ BUT ~ we try not to show it and do our best in LIFE & LOVE ! My Alter Ego knows much better what I am capable of and sometimes when i talk to myself in a full~length Mirror my AE says go on BRIAN you can do it ~ just be Yourself ! When i do (in Life & Love) the result is always positive ! Thanks for sharing & caring this PEACOCK is spreading his Feathers ! Hugs of Appreciation ~ BRIAN

    • Lakiea

      Thank you so much I really appreciate it !

    • Tony36

      Well written and expressed

      • Lakiea

        Thank you I appreciate it !

        • Tony36

          Welcome

        • lost-but-not-broken17

          This is beautiful

          • Lakiea

            Thank you so much !



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