I love when our bodies lay side by side
Sleeping without you I couldn't abide,
I sleep much better
When our bodies are spooned together,
Your body - mine to caress
I adore you I must confess,
Your glassy eyes reflect my love
In the moonlight from above,
Your hair receding from my touch
Oh I love you so much!
I whisper sweet nothings in your ear
You won't share my secrets I have no fear,
You've been by my side for many a year
My wonderful, adorable teddy bear!
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Author:
sue.evans (
Offline) - Published: August 25th, 2017 04:35
- Comment from author about the poem: Not what you think😂😂
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Certainly not what I thought.
Ah the mind works on so many levels 😂😂!
I loved it. I liked the ending. Made it all fun.
Hoped to get people thinking on different levels 😂 Thanks for reading and commenting.
Quite quite delicious. Superbly, lovingly written.
Thank you - such lovely feedback. Thank you for reading glad you enjoyed it!
Hmmmm has it occurred to you many ladies call their big cuddly partners a teddy bear. Something i've been labelled with a few times. I even have a well chewed ear.
Yes - that did occur to me - that's why writing this was fun because it works on two different levels and it's down to the readers mind 😂😂
I read your comment first, so knew when I started to read the poem that most likely you were not talking about another human being. Thought of maybe a cat, or dog. When I got to the glassy eyes I knew it had to be an inanimate object, unless of course it was somebody totally drunk. Did not figure on a teddy bear though, so the surprise stayed intact.
Great poem!
Thank you 😊
I think it is furry. Hahaha.
Funny piece, that make my weekend.
Thank you.
Thank you 😊
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