I will ingest your science tonight
Beneath the pangs of existence
Along the rhythm of your brainwaves
Crimson smoke festering
As you brand symbols onto my aorta
Skipping beats in the name of halcyon
Laughing in the face of Death.
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Author:
Tirzah Marie (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 25th, 2017 15:06
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HOLA TIRZAH ~ i have started to read your Poems ~ and I love them ! They have a mystical quality about them (often missing from other MPS Poets) which leaves the interpretation to the reader and most (because of this ?) seem reluctant to comment. Love the title ~ it's a holiday in the Uk so "i'm feeling alive !" When we are young we all enjoy being lifted through "substances" to a "higher astral plane" ~ Rhythms of our brainwaves heightened" "halcyon days experienced" and when we are young Death seems a distant fantasy ~ so we laugh in his face ! Thanks for sharing ~ please comment on my comment ~ yours BRIAN (UK)
Brian, your comment humbles me and I love your take on my piece. Youthful vagabond minds. Thanks friend:)
Thanks TIRZAH ~ Love all your pictures your are lovely ~ YOUTHFUL VAGABOND MINDS ~ How long does it last ~ I'm only one third into my life (33) my GF is 29 A Physio & Masseuse and a lot of my Students study Beauty Therapy so that keeps me young ! I'm a BIOCHEMIST and live near London England. MPS is a very empathetic site ~ please post more Poems and I'll do my best to interpret them ! My POEM today is Gothic about a WITCH ~ OOOOOOOOOOOH Beat wishes ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Not so Youthful Vagabond ! (UK)
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