Bleached Attitude like
Someone took my Place.
Unremitting Self-Colored
never felt like This.
Imperfection engineered into Grace.
A blindfolded Love Raft
suspended in Bliss.
Divine love Tasting like your lovers Face.
I Never opened myself like This.
Surrendering Control to our own Place.
Time in My Brain replace by Feeling of a Soft Kiss.
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Author:
yourselfobject (
Offline) - Published: August 26th, 2017 09:53
- Category: Love
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Comments4
sweet words of love
I appreciate you; being the first to contact me, a lover of love poems. Tks.
Like a flower opening to the rays of sunlight. nice writing.
You are so right. I see it better. Thanks for the encouragement.
I love your poem and the paint goes well with it. A beautiful expression of love and you used blue color on your writing. Blue is my favorite color. Thanks for sharing and welcome to MPS
My favorite color is blue! Thanks for the welcome. I am starting to feel this web site is a place i can develop.
You are welcome. I bet you can develop your liking and be confortable here. It is a friendly place to post your writings.
WELCOME TO MPS ~ Thanks for your first Love Poem ! Love the structure and the spacing and the content ! It expresses the awareness of two Lovers for each other ~ the opening ~ the surrendering ~ which we all experience (Yin & Yang) resulting in a real (or anticipated ?) SOFT KISS ! Love the visual (very Andy Warhol !) which perfectly compliments the yearning in your lovely LOVE POEM ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ BRIAN (UK)
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