Farewell -cinquain

myself and me

Farewell-I

Standing 
On the long pier
Watching the white ferry
Disappear in far horizon
Tear down

 

Farewell-II

Standing 
On ferry deck
See her waving on pier
Hot tears running down my cold face
Heart break

  • Author: myself and me (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 26th, 2017 19:03
  • Comment from author about the poem: Here is the cinquain for Santita. Thank you for encourage me to do this. The first is for the one on the pier, the second is for the one on the ferry.
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Comments4

  • Accidental Poet

    Both are very heartfelt. Excellent writing. ; )

    • myself and me

      Thanks. I am deeply touched by yours today.

    • FredPeyer

      Farewells are always difficult, and you said it so well, M&M, from both sides.

      • myself and me

        This is a true experience, I have been on both sides. Thank you.

        • FredPeyer

          Did you happen to leave yourself? 🙂

          • 1 more comment

        • Michael Edwards

          so well thought out and written - love it and I am sure Santita will as well.

        • dusk arising

          OMG i just had deja vu with this. Nice bit of writing.



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