if I could paint beauty
It'd be a picture of you
Many colors of love
And the meaning of truth.
Your face is the texture
Sun, moon, and the earth.
Perfection from heaven,
A real womans worth.
When God gave you life,
Angels bowed to your hand,
The most beautiful creature
In all of his land.
A beautiful heart,
No flaw in your soul,
Your eyes flow like oceans,
That never grows old.
The touch of your body,
So silky and smooth,
Never again will god create
Beauty like you .
By Vincent
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Author:
Vincent & Jodi (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 27th, 2017 00:13
- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is about how beautiful Jodi is on the inside and on the out she is the most beautiful woman I have ever met in my entire life she makes me take an extra breath every time I look at her and Everytime I'm near her my mind goes crazy I love her so much inside and out
- Category: Love
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Comments4
A beautiful write for a beautiful lady.
Thank u for liking my work do u think I have a future in writing and where do u think I can improve I would really like ur opinion and feedback
Whether or not you have a future in writing is entirely up to you Vincent. As far as I am concerned, this poem is pretty much perfect. Maybe you could improve on the rhyming a bit, but that is only my opinion. Giving you all that because of your comment.
All in all, I really love your poem. It is a beautiful declaration of love!
A touching and beautiful write!
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