malubotelho

Forbidden

I'm looking for forbidden places
maybe displacements, inconceivable states of being
Or hollow subject beyond seeing
followed by paths of secondaries thoughts.

There prowess have hidden its memories
left under cold, heavy stones
on subsequent nights of faded tones
Compared to over played melodies.

I'm seeking for a voided space
recondite, cancealed on cryptic layers
Where time has veiled its face hermetically, blinding eyes of betrayers.

There lays the verity of temples
uncloaked demystified sleeping
Coiled under vertebrae vapors
musing, probing, desirous, awaiting.

Comments9

  • FredPeyer

    Wow, Malu, and you said you are missing vocabulary! Well I guess you found it! 'uncloaked demystified sleeping' is not something you pick up on the street!
    Great poem, I salute you!

    • malubotelho

      Thanks Fred. Well, like you said this language is not found on streets. Perhaps on dictionary. I'm a student of the Gnosticism and this is where it comes from. Before was very secretive but with the internet not so much. One can find the language but it's meaning still left for any one of us to discover. This is why it is forbidden. You can only find it inside you. Within

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Thanks for caring and sharing SISTER ~ a beautiful and contemplative PICTURE & POEM for Sunday ! This is also my experience ! It is not with PEOPLE but in SPIRITUAL & MYSTICAL PLACES that we find GOD and Spiritual Enlightenment ~ Seek SISTER and You will find ~ AMEN Brotherly Love to You # BROTHER BRIAN Please check my Prayer for today "Bridge over Troubled Water" Thanks B.

      • malubotelho

        Thanks brother. You've said all. Have a wonderful Sunday

      • dusk arising

        Malu, you know we shall all see these places again in time and when we do, our earthborn questions will become insignificant as, we relax into the comfort of our spiritual home, our place of re-birth. I think you describe our earthborn quest beautifully here.

        • malubotelho

          I'm replying again because I wrote something wrong on my other comment. I said it is more to be felt and not felled. Sorry about that. It is more to be felt than to be understood. Thanks Dusk. You understand it.

        • OUTBACK

          YES* - THIS* HEAR*- IS* THE EXPLORATIONAL* - EXPRESSIONS* OF THE UNIVERSE* - SPEAKING - ALWAYS SO - IN IT'S INDIVIDUAL* & UNIQUE* WAY !

          • malubotelho

            Thanks Out, I totally agree with you. It is within each of us.

          • ShannonXx

            Absolutely loved this! Some very strong lines

            • malubotelho

              Thanks Shannon. Your comments means a lot to me.

            • WL Schuett

              Good imagery strong poem loved it

              • malubotelho

                Thanks WL. I appreciate your comments. I know it is not the kind of poem I write everyday. Thanks for understanding it.

              • Diamond

                Beautiful malu. This is deep and powerful and also giving a different perspective. I liked it very much my friend.

                • malubotelho

                  Thanks dear Diamond. Yes, it is very profound. Something one need to explore on your own.

                  • Diamond

                    Yes, most definitely. Many of my older writes are mostly metaphysical. I certainly understand what you mean.

                  • myself and me

                    "I'm looking for forbidden places"
                    Once you find it, please open the entrance for me. Thank you.

                    • malubotelho

                      Thanks MM. I know where it is but still not permitted to enter. I let you know if the door opens for me.

                    • Santita

                      Malu, this was a powerful write, my dear. You said you were tired of writing mushy, well you certainly changed it up, and got me thinking with this one. Nicely done.

                      • malubotelho

                        Thanks dear Santita. I'm happy to see you here. I missed you. Well, this is different because it comes from a deeper side of me. This is based on my Gnostic studies. And esoterism. This is a poem about the Kundaline. The sacred fire. I'm happy that you liked because this one was a very strange way of writing. Took me 2 hours to finish but it was half done awaiting for me to finish. Weird stuff. Again dear. Thanks for being here. I appreciate your presence.

                        • Santita

                          You're welcome, dear. The sacred fire, I like that! I had a not so great weekend, but I am back :) I missed you too, lovely.

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