Notice of absence from Sara Storkson
Hey guys,
Due to some unforseen personal stuff I will be gone for awhile.
♡
Hey guys,
Due to some unforseen personal stuff I will be gone for awhile.
♡
My words don't matter.
I don't matter.
I'm just an object you can keep hidden. I'm your property and yours alone.
My feelings are "dumb" or "invalid"
You say you love me
And yet
You make it so I'm scared to be creative Too awkward to explain my feelings.
Fuck you.
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Author:
Sara Storkson (
Offline) - Published: August 27th, 2017 04:25
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Comments5
I'm not a lover of bad language when it's used gratuitously but that certainly isn't the case here. That final sentence sums it up brilliantly to make a great poem even stronger. Well written Sara.
I totally get that, and I agree with you. I use strong language to convey certain feelings without over doing it.
Thank you! I was going through a situation these past few years that..wasn't good. I got myself to a better place. It took all I had to accomplish that and get back to where I was as a writer.
taking charge of yourselfis great more people need to feel this way instead or just living in someone elses world, very well done in writing and real life
Much appreciated ♡
Sara, I like your writings. Strong and direct. Contemporary. I was looking to find new generation poets when I found this site so I'm pleased to read you. Thanks also for making favorite my poem: Forbidden
Of course doll, and thank you so much♡
It's your life to live for yourself. Stand your ground. Excellent declaration of your independence. ; )
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