Want to be with you

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  WL Schuett August 30th, 2017 12:56

  Straight forward heartfelt, easy to believe, good poem

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    myself and meAugust 30th, 2017 13:34

    Thank you. You re-write your ID. 🙂

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  FredPeyer August 30th, 2017 14:09

  I love this one M&M. Looking simple, but yet so full of love. It is the simple things that make us happy, like holding hands, watching a movie together, helping each other in the kitchen, etc.
  Very well penned!

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    myself and meAugust 30th, 2017 14:22

    Thank you. Kitchen, how come I miss the kitchen, the center of our life.

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  malubotelho August 30th, 2017 21:00

  Thanks for this lovely romantic poem. Is it my impression or people here are being mellow yellow like me?

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    myself and meAugust 30th, 2017 21:53

    Thank you for reading and commenting. Do you mean the Song?

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    malubotelhoAugust 31st, 2017 07:20

    I mean your poem. I always says that most of my writes are very mellow yellow, what means, soft and romantic and lately I've seem more people writing love poems. This is what I mean. You did a great job on yours. I enjoyed to read.

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    myself and meAugust 31st, 2017 12:55

    Now I know. Thank you.

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  Goldfinch60 August 31st, 2017 01:39

  Very good write, we all have those people who we want to be ith all the time.

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    myself and meAugust 31st, 2017 12:56

    Thanks. G.

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  dusk arising August 31st, 2017 03:54

  Lifes definately incomplete without that special someone. Nice write.

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    myself and meAugust 31st, 2017 12:57

    You are absolutely right. Thank you.