Our love
ends
in the last drop of my tear
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Author:
myself and me (
Offline) - Published: September 1st, 2017 10:44
- Comment from author about the poem: When love end, I had a good cry.
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Beautiful ....
Thanks. WL.
Super! Me of short words too - makes a change for me?! heehee.
Thank you. O.
....and a new one starts in the first smile thereafter!
Great poem, M&M. Short, but with a lot of emotion! Well penned!
Yes. I like that smile with a new one. Thank you.
That is very very clever. Well done.
Thanks. D.
Absolutely beautiful short poem!
Thanks. Christina.
Beautiful emotive write.
Thanks. I am sort of emotional recently.
Very nice short piece. Clever one. I always like when I can say important things with little words. You did it.
Thank you. M. Get some sleep as you can.
It still too early for me. I only sleep after 12:00 midnight. Boo! After the dark hours👻
Wow, you are a night owl. By then, my brain does not function.
This is my problem. I love the night for so many reasons and I love the day because the day makes me feel alive and do things. I just love to live.
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