Remember the first time I saw you
It was raining
And I offered you an umbrella
Without hesitation, you took it out of my hands
Smiling so passionately
I couldn’t help but fall in love with your beautiful
Green eyes
They were magical
It lit up my whole life
Days later we hocked up
And that’s when things
Turned for the worse
You broke my heart into a billion pieces
There it was
Shatter all over the floor
You walked all over it
Like nothing mattered
My heart was broken
I tried for years to get over you
But nobody could compare to you
My heart was still aching for your love
What happened to the person that
I used to know
That person who was loving, caring, and giving
In a split second, you turned
Into a person, I didn’t recognize
My heart is broken
Because of you
Now that I look back
I’m glad things didn’t work out for us
Because now I know my worth
My heart has healed
No longer bruise
By your monstrous ways
So, in the end
This my break-up
Letter to you
- Author: PoemsReverything ( Offline)
- Published: September 1st, 2017 20:12
- Comment from author about the poem: This an open letter to the one who broke my heart at such a tender age of 13. P.S. thank you for doing that. Now I know myself as a person.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 15
Comments1
This is great. Feed back is also great. One thing you can do is fix some tenses and change some words so the flow is eased. Great poem.
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