After Having lost two loves so dear
I'd never fathom feeling death twice near
my heart now knows this terrible fear
Sometimes My Own Eyes Remind In tears
Left My soul more hollow and bare
do I or don't I still care?
I feel myself a shadow, now compare
Hidden from me my feeling
of true sorrow gladly stealing
to everyone id consider meeting
karma would yet charge kneeling
my hearts not worth beating
first my mother, then second my lover
emptiness I feel deep down, still wonder?
Hades I would enter two times over
I’ve broken god's commandments, shall I bother?
My soul Is stained, I’m to blame
being free in life I must believe
arachne spins a web I may leave
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Author:
J.M. Shine (Pseudonym) (
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Comments2
Taking the death of others leads us to a dark place. Beautifully written terribly sad...
Thanks Mugs. I do hold resentments of myself its true.
I can feel your sorrow and only love shall fill the hollow. Hope you get the strength to overcome the fear.
Beautiful yet sad writing.
Thank you, MM. This poem always has an effect on me every time I read it. Losing someone as close as your mother when you are 16 years old can really hurt. Losing my girlfriend hurt just as bad. As I get older I take things more closer to heart. We had been together for only 4 years but it was 4 years with her I truly felt love for the first time.
I am very sorry for your loss. No matter how short true love is, it will last life long. Best.
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