Half Of My Heart

After Having lost two loves so dear

I'd never fathom feeling death twice near

my heart now knows this terrible fear

Sometimes My Own Eyes Remind In tears

Left My soul more hollow and bare

do I or don't I still care?

I feel myself a shadow, now compare


Hidden from me my feeling

of true sorrow gladly stealing

to everyone id consider meeting

karma would yet charge kneeling

my hearts not worth beating


first my mother, then second my lover

emptiness I feel deep down, still wonder?

Hades I would enter two times over

I’ve broken god's commandments, shall I bother?

My soul Is stained, I’m to blame

being free in life I must believe

arachne spins a web I may leave


  • Mugsdaddy

    Taking the death of others leads us to a dark place. Beautifully written terribly sad...

    • Shine

      Thanks Mugs. I do hold resentments of myself its true.

    • myself and me

      I can feel your sorrow and only love shall fill the hollow. Hope you get the strength to overcome the fear.
      Beautiful yet sad writing.

      • Shine

        Thank you, MM. This poem always has an effect on me every time I read it. Losing someone as close as your mother when you are 16 years old can really hurt. Losing my girlfriend hurt just as bad. As I get older I take things more closer to heart. We had been together for only 4 years but it was 4 years with her I truly felt love for the first time.

        • myself and me

          I am very sorry for your loss. No matter how short true love is, it will last life long. Best.

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