tell me, do you dream when night has come
as an angel combs the rainbow in your hair
the stars come down to bejewel your eyes
and sunset kisses waves upon your shore
do you tiptoe behind the edge of morning
and pausing wake the flowers with your kiss
are those pulsing fluff of butterfly wings
the gentle sound of your beating heart
does a breeze caress your silk soft flesh
your full moist lips release a gentle sigh
and a smile enlighten that beautiful face
in waves of pleasure in your nights
upon these thoughts i dwell
as i rest my mind to sleep
and my dreams delight
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Offline) - Published: September 3rd, 2017 07:46
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This was a really pleasant read, it made me feel happy and calm. I related it to my children and niece with their soft baby features. I imagined them being visited by a beautiful sleep angel who combed their hair and sent them off to an amazing dreamland thus giving me peace and the ability to drift off myself. Beautiful.
That really is the sort of fantasy i had in mind so i'm pleased you could feel/visualise it. Please see also my poem quench if you like this sort of fantasy thing. Thank you for reading and commenting, much appreciated.
Liked this one, made me think of a past love. Beautifully written
Nice thoughts i hope. Thank you for your kind comments.
very nice 🙂 look forward to more
Thank you owen.
What a lovely piece of imagery = well done dusk
Thank you sir, i will try to produce more of this fantasy. It beats depressing stuff by a mile, such a joy to write it.
Reading this makes me feel so relax and a bit sleepy.
So peaceful. Have a wonderful dream.
Oh i do have quite wonderful dreams, thanks for leaving a comment, peaceful is good.
I too was reminded of a long time love. Beautiful dusk.
Hmm seems i've struck a love note for folks here. Thank you for leaving a comment.
The pleasure was all mine. ; )
This flowed brilliantly 🙂
Thank you TN96, i was certainly enjoyable writing in this fantasy mode again.
The imagery is immense, a truly beautiful poem, very relatable.
Thank you
Thank you Luke, pleased you enjoyed this.
Truly, this a beautiful poem. The images are exquisite. Bravo
Thank you seeker, your very kind.
Wow Dusk! It is so magical, soft and beautiful. So perfect. I like to write about fantasyland and this one went straight to my heart ❤️
Thank you.
This piece and the previous 'quench' are my first forays into this fantasy romancing world of delights and judging by the popularity of these two i think i shall be revisiting again soon. Thank you so much for your encouragement and kind comments.. x
Beautiful write!
Thank you samreen, very kind comment.
Enchanting I loved this.
hmmm i wish i was so inspired every night/day. In times of lack of inspiration i tend to shut up rather than force something out. I'm quiet at the moment i think.
Thank you for reading and commenting. Please have a look at 'quench' i published a few days back if you like this sort of fantasy thing.
Soothing and calm.. the order of the day... some words kick start the imagination... these words set it free.... Neville
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