dusk arising

pulsing fluff

 

 

 

tell me, do you dream when night has come
as an angel combs the rainbow in your hair
the stars come down to bejewel your eyes
and sunset kisses waves upon your shore

do you tiptoe behind the edge of morning
and pausing wake the flowers with your kiss
are those pulsing fluff of butterfly wings
the gentle sound of your beating heart

does a breeze caress your silk soft flesh
your full moist lips release a gentle sigh
and a smile enlighten that beautiful face
in waves of pleasure in your nights

       upon these thoughts i dwell
                    as i rest my mind to sleep
                               and my dreams delight

Comments13

  • BlueDays

    This was a really pleasant read, it made me feel happy and calm. I related it to my children and niece with their soft baby features. I imagined them being visited by a beautiful sleep angel who combed their hair and sent them off to an amazing dreamland thus giving me peace and the ability to drift off myself. Beautiful.

    • dusk arising

      That really is the sort of fantasy i had in mind so i'm pleased you could feel/visualise it. Please see also my poem quench if you like this sort of fantasy thing. Thank you for reading and commenting, much appreciated.

    • Mugsdaddy

      Liked this one, made me think of a past love. Beautifully written

      • dusk arising

        Nice thoughts i hope. Thank you for your kind comments.

      • Big poet

        very nice :) look forward to more

      • Michael Edwards

        What a lovely piece of imagery = well done dusk

        • dusk arising

          Thank you sir, i will try to produce more of this fantasy. It beats depressing stuff by a mile, such a joy to write it.

        • myself and me

          Reading this makes me feel so relax and a bit sleepy.
          So peaceful. Have a wonderful dream.

          • dusk arising

            Oh i do have quite wonderful dreams, thanks for leaving a comment, peaceful is good.

          • Accidental Poet

            I too was reminded of a long time love. Beautiful dusk.

            • dusk arising

              Hmm seems i've struck a love note for folks here. Thank you for leaving a comment.

              • Accidental Poet

                The pleasure was all mine. ; )

              • TN96

                This flowed brilliantly :)

                • dusk arising

                  Thank you TN96, i was certainly enjoyable writing in this fantasy mode again.

                • Luke Gordon

                  The imagery is immense, a truly beautiful poem, very relatable.
                  Thank you

                  • dusk arising

                    Thank you Luke, pleased you enjoyed this.

                  • Seeker

                    Truly, this a beautiful poem. The images are exquisite. Bravo

                    • dusk arising

                      Thank you seeker, your very kind.

                    • malubotelho

                      Wow Dusk! It is so magical, soft and beautiful. So perfect. I like to write about fantasyland and this one went straight to my heart ❤️
                      Thank you.

                      • dusk arising

                        This piece and the previous 'quench' are my first forays into this fantasy romancing world of delights and judging by the popularity of these two i think i shall be revisiting again soon. Thank you so much for your encouragement and kind comments.. x

                      • Samreen Chowdhury

                        Beautiful write!

                        • dusk arising

                          Thank you samreen, very kind comment.

                        • maggie

                          Enchanting I loved this.

                          • dusk arising

                            hmmm i wish i was so inspired every night/day. In times of lack of inspiration i tend to shut up rather than force something out. I'm quiet at the moment i think.
                            Thank you for reading and commenting. Please have a look at 'quench' i published a few days back if you like this sort of fantasy thing.

                          • Neville

                            Soothing and calm.. the order of the day... some words kick start the imagination... these words set it free.... Neville



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