Exit-etheree

myself and me

 

I am roaming in a colorless world

The pain reminds me I'm still alive
Tears blurred eyes can not distinguish
Which way lead to the exit
Drag the lonely shadow
With a broken heart
Through the thick mist
Try to seek
A path
Out

  • Author: myself and me (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 3rd, 2017 08:29
  • Comment from author about the poem: Finally, I got it done. A poem in etheree format. I got the last four lines first and expanded from there. Try to get out of the blue of separation. Enjoy.
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments9

  • orchidee

    A fine write M. Would it do me good to be brief sometimes?! But I must sing, and mainly long songs/hymn-poems! lol.

  • myself and me

    Thanks. O. Your poems serve as the food and cleaner for spirit. The more the better.

  • Michael Edwards

    Sad indeed but a brill write - congrats m&m

    • myself and me

      Thanks. M.E. for stopping by. It is sad, but will be over soon.

    • sue.evans

      Great etheree - I am really enjoying this format. Your poem really describes the struggle- lovely.

      • myself and me

        Thanks Sue. Santita encouraged me to do this one.

      • dusk arising

        Well done M&M

      • WL Schuett

        M&M always pushing yourself, very commendable....good poem

        • myself and me

          Thanks. WL. I am encouraged by Santita, without her, I wouldn't imagine, I could write something like this.

        • malubotelho

          Beautiful poem MM. You did a great job here. I was enjoying so much the form that almost did not bother me that it is sad.

          • myself and me

            Thank you. It seems I did the homework well.

            • malubotelho

              Of course you did. I loved to read this and I thank you.

            • FredPeyer

              The way out is through the door that opens when another closes!
              Great poem, M&M, and soon the colors will return to your world!!!!

              • myself and me

                Thank you. FP. Yes, one day the color shall return.

              • ruby.e

                Sad but beautiful. Really liked this.



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