A million stars light up the sky
I know I must say goodbye
A silent cry
No tears I will try
Not wanting to part
I do with a heavy heart
The sun will rise and set
Once again we shall have met
Maggie
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WELCOME MAGGIE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ Excellent ~ compact an yet bursting with Rhyme & Rhythm ! We can empathise because we know _ from experience ~ That parting is such Sweet Sorrow ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
Thank you Brian
A beautiful writing. Welcome to this site.
Thank you.
The last line is worrying me. It reads 'well shall have met' should that be 'we'? Would then make sense as a soulmates piece encompassing prior lifes etc. Nicely written though, even if i have got a wrong handle on this. Please comment on my stuff.
Yes indeed it should thank you
Ah i'm pleased i was on the right track. There are several of us here who are believers in prior lives, reincarnation, soul mates and spiritual matters associated with that... have a look at my piece 'arrow' which touches on the subject.
we can all relate to this,great job
Thank you Ron
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