O My ....

maggie

 

A million stars light up the sky
I know I must say goodbye
A silent cry
No tears I will try
Not wanting to part
I do with a heavy heart
The sun will rise and set
Once again we shall have met

Maggie 

  • Author: maggie (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 3rd, 2017 10:50
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 45
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Comments8

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME MAGGIE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ Excellent ~ compact an yet bursting with Rhyme & Rhythm ! We can empathise because we know _ from experience ~ That parting is such Sweet Sorrow ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B

  • maggie

    Thank you Brian

  • myself and me

    A beautiful writing. Welcome to this site.

  • maggie

    Thank you.

  • dusk arising

    The last line is worrying me. It reads 'well shall have met' should that be 'we'? Would then make sense as a soulmates piece encompassing prior lifes etc. Nicely written though, even if i have got a wrong handle on this. Please comment on my stuff.

  • maggie

    Yes indeed it should thank you

    • dusk arising

      Ah i'm pleased i was on the right track. There are several of us here who are believers in prior lives, reincarnation, soul mates and spiritual matters associated with that... have a look at my piece 'arrow' which touches on the subject.

    • ron parrish aka wordman

      we can all relate to this,great job

    • maggie

      Thank you Ron



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