it follows

It follows me when I look at child playing in the park it follows me when I see two lovers embracing in the dark
It follows me when when I leave the dream world laying in a bed so big it follows me I'm alone at restaurant eating like a pig
Do you see it do you know it's name

It follows me in my dreams
It never was what it seemed
Left a sharp pain in my heart
Wish I saw it from the start
To the wind my heart was thrown
Now I walk this path alone

I’m followed by the wind
It speaks its whispering song
In answer to rescind
each long lamented wrong.
The wind shows me no ill
And soon I walk in peace
but tho' the wind blows still
My ills will never cease.
Michael Edwards

it follows me at dusk,
turns my soul into a dry husk
of what it was when I was cheery,
as the sunlight fades to dreary.


  • Santita

    This whole thing is great!

    Hood! you killed it with assasin ( no pun intended)!

  • Mugsdaddy

    This is better than I could have imagined great finish thank you all I really feel like I belong. I'm like an infant compared to all of you but with your support I feel that I'm moving in the right direction. Thanks again we did good

  • Candlewitch

    I love it all, and the grand finish on it. Mugs, you are a part of our family, for sure!

    ever, eddy
    *hugs, Cat

  • UnspokenVoice92

    Intense.. Almost sinister. Goosebumps

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