It's 107 degrees outside
The sun is out
The children play and laugh
People are splashing in the pool
But, all I can think about is how cold I am inside
All I feel is bitterness if I'm lucky
Or nothing at all usually
Inside it's below zero
The sun hides behind dark grey clouds
There is nothing but silence or the echo of my glass heart shattering
The only splashing I hear are my tears when they hit the floor
This heat has boiled me up in sadness and despair
I burn as I freeze up inside and no one cares
No one loves me
I don't even love me
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Author:
Ahsi (
Offline) - Published: September 6th, 2017 00:30
- Comment from author about the poem: it's just how i feel
- Category: Reflection
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Comments2
This piece is incredible and you do a great job with contrasting imagery. Tomorrow is a new day, and the sun does come out again. Sometimes you have to take the strength no one else will give you. I wish you the best of luck.
Thank you honestly I'm honored, I read your poems and really your the incredible one. Thanks again
WELCOME ASHI ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ! Elegantly penned but with a sad message "No on loves me ~ not even myself" I jsut want to say I LOVE YOU ! and so will lots of Members as you share & care. This is a very empathetic site ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
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