I can't ignore
The way he makes me feel
How it feels when he hugs me
How it feels when he says my name
Or when he kisses me
The feeling is unreal
Was unreal.
The way he held my hand
The way he looked at me
The way he talked to me
Like I was
Dreaming
Like if all I did was..
Take too deep of a breath
Or
Too heavy of a step
I'd wake up
And he'd be gone
You'd stop making me feel
Like that
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Beautifully sad...
Thank you
WELCOME WILLOW (lovely name !) ~ THANKS FOR AN EXCELLENT FIRST POEM ~ Much food for thought ! The "feeling" when we are in Love is indescribable ~ but i like your take on it ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
Lovely poem
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