Something Greater.

Fay Slimm.

 

 

Something Greater.

 

We pair of home-comers
built from painful baggage a water-tight dream,

we painted an idyll of walled delight.

A bright corner where care could cover old scars.

Oh that happy hand-in-glove fit of regenerative
pleasure which we dared to admit

into the picture of autumnal love.

Such easy laughter sparked need to spend more
new-found treasure in glad togetherness.

Fresh as youth the stream we dug from aridity.

Your tenderness stoked heat
in forgotten feelings, blazed pathways to places
I had never been

and seared heaven into every greeting.

So gentle our mountain
of unleashed freedom that time gave us

chances to climb to new heights.

I thrived in sweet air of acceptability.

You re-sculpted sallow existence, blushed my
palid future, accessed the girl inside
and unfastened this

latched-up former conformist.

You let loose love's abandon and I did not refuse.

Beautiful man your breath
warmed every fold of compatible essence, toned
any slack in my short-sighted outlook
and de-misted

smeared myopic signals.

Duo-passion soon oiled and honed rarely used
adaptability so we could reach bliss.

Our joinings were something greater than flesh
and that better otherness I shall

always remember.

No ocean of parting can break devotion's deep
integrity and I know for certain

we shall meet again.

Oh unforgettable man
you stole into destiny, captured my soul

and now you hold it forever.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 14th, 2017 02:01
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments8

  • FredPeyer

    And with this poem, Fay, you stole our admiration!

  • Michael Edwards

    Love the way use the language in your work - word associations etc that can only come from a great poetic mind

  • Accidental Poet

    A love so deep I understand so well. Fay, you are of the greatest hearts and minds to compose such great poetry. ; )

  • Louis Gibbs

    The abandonment in late-blooming love makes possible attaining unforgettable new heights in soul's satisfaction. Well told in this beauty, Fay!

  • orchidee

    Good write Fay.

  • Tony36

    Well written and expressed

  • Christina8

    I love the language that you use in this poem. But it's a poem so relatable because I know it so well. Superb job on this!!

  • WL Schuett

    Love related most blissfully, well done



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