*edited version
Can you see me
Can you see me
I'm right here in front of you
I'm right here in front of you
My defenses have long faded away
My defenses have long faded away
How hard can it be
Is it just not meant to be
Why do you continue to look right through
Will you continue to look straight through
Tell me what you want me to say
If only I knew the right words to say
What can I do to make you see
How can I make you see
How I long for you, if you only knew
To notice the things I do
That more than anything I just want you to stay
Are because I just want you to stay
I'll get down on my knees and plea
I'll get on my knees in a crying plea
If that's what it takes to be in your view
My pride gone from anyone's view
But it's all useless to my dismay
It all seems useless to my dismay
It will remain this way I foresee
Constantly all I can foresee
My heart continuously in pain all a skew
Is my heart in endless pain all a skew
While I wait for just one perfect day
Desiring for that unlikely day
When you finally decree
When you finally decree
Your eyes and heart now ring true
That your eyes and heart ring true
Baffled by the past with a promised future never to stray
You see me now and everything will be okay
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Author:
Mandi (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Needs work....😔 So I changed it but left the old one up for comparison I suppose. Don't really know why I edited it this way.
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Comments2
I like how you are working this poem I like some of each , in either the yearning comes through if I had pick one I d pick the second version ...good work Mandi
Thank you 😊
it is a natural thing,attraction,
but we hope to be seen and loved
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