Hearts can't break,
They aren't glass.
Hearts can't be ripped apart,
They aren't paper.
Yet somehow mine shattered,
I knew that summers day we met
And the winter day we parted
That you had the power to make me feel
Anything.
Even if it was impossible.
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Author:
Skye Bellasario (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 18th, 2017 14:16
- Comment from author about the poem: I know it's not the best, please leave any constructive criticism in the comments.
- Category: Letter
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Comments4
Beautiful.
Thank you!
I love this.
Thank you, it means a lot 🙂
WELCOME SKYEBELL ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ Elegant in its Structure and interesting in its Subject ! Well written and spaced in modern free verse ! It has rhythm and is smooth to read and recite ! I have been IN & OUT of love for the past 17 years (since I was 17) so i can testify that my Heart has been wounded and bruised but NEVER BROKEN or TORN APART ! And YES I have been empowered and made a Better Man by each of my lady Friends including ANGELA (29) my current GF ! Please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
Thank you, I will be sure to read your poems
Nicely done.... free verse with a flow.
thank you 🙂
You're welcome my friend... I invite you to read some of my poems.
They are all beautifully written
Thank you for your comment. I work a lot on my writing.
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