Explain love to me
In words I can understand
Sincere outstretched hands
Is it seasonal
Like the warm breeze in Autumn
Falling leaves and all
Or like Winters ice
Does it fade and melt away
Wanting it to stay
Fragrant like springs touch
Beautiful blooms in the sun
Watch it come undone
Or like Summers heat
Does it burn you when it can
Blown away like sand
I think it's all four
Can't have one without the next
Most beautiful Hex
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Well done Haiku! Well worded! I like the 4th one the best. "watch it come undone". Guess it's the mood I'm in today. 🙂 All were very good!
You're very kind Christina. Thank you.
Thanks MAN ~ I love HAIKU and these are perfect and (as you have presented) I prefer a themed group rather than just a "stand alone". The analogy between Love and the Seasons is a popular one in poetry and you have explored it perfectly. I agree with you Love is reflected in all four Seasons ! Thanks for sharing. My poem today is a collaboration with CHRISTINA on Four Solar Bodies Venus ~ Mars ~ Sun ~ Moon. Please check ~ thanks BRIAN
I will. Thank you for you in depth compliment. It means a lot, and I appreciate it.
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