You, my darling, have shown me how love feels.
You are like a big breath of smooth, fresh air.
Waking my heart, it starts turning it's wheels.
Our Love's beautiful like silky, smooth hair.
Although there might be bad fates I wonder,
As in sad break ups and painful heart breaks,
We'll think together, as we ponder.
Although, of course, the thoughts make my heart ache.
I will still dream of the beautiful scenes,
Because sweets, you make me a better me.
Looks like I have found my true love it seems,
I'll hope, that fate has planned us meant to be.
I will always try my hardest for you.
To summarize, if it's disguised, I love you.
- Author: AlyxPoems ( Offline)
- Published: September 24th, 2017 12:16
- Category: Love
- Views: 19
Comments3
beautiful words of love
Welcome to MPS. Great first write. I hope these beautiful words of love transpire into something great! Thanks for sharing!
WELCOME ALYX ~ Thanks for your first poem. Excellent in
structure ~ 4 4 4 2 sonnet and with a consistent Rhyme pattern. Also plenty of rhythm. The subject LOVE is very apt for a sonnet. For me it does say I LOVE YOU ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
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