Alive

Katy S.

the connection between

the two

was elegant and

breathtaking.

almost surreal in a way.

he brought out

pieces of her that she  

didn't even know existed.

he made her feel

genuine and real.

for the first time

she felt

Alive.

 

  • Author: k.s. (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 25th, 2017 15:10
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 23
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  • Louis Gibbs

    The magic of love well expressed in this fine poem, Katy. Welcome to MPS!

    • Katy S.

      Thank you so much!

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Welcome KATY ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ elegantly written and spaced. I love the Topic and uit is something many of us can empathise with ! As we explore Love & Relationships in our Teens we suddenly (and often without warning !) we meet someone who ~ for the first time ~ blows away the cobwebs and makes us feel really alive ~ it's called LOVE ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN (UK)

      • Katy S.

        Thank you so much Brian! I totally agree with you. I think young people give a new idea and fresh feeling on love and relationships. I appreciate your kind words thank you.

      • FredPeyer

        Katy, you perfectly captured that feeling of euphoria one gets when falling in love. Great poem!

        • Katy S.

          Thank you so much!



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