the connection between
the two
was elegant and
breathtaking.
almost surreal in a way.
he brought out
pieces of her that she
didn't even know existed.
he made her feel
genuine and real.
for the first time
she felt
Alive.
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Author:
k.s. (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 25th, 2017 15:10
- Category: Love
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Comments3
The magic of love well expressed in this fine poem, Katy. Welcome to MPS!
Thank you so much!
Welcome KATY ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ elegantly written and spaced. I love the Topic and uit is something many of us can empathise with ! As we explore Love & Relationships in our Teens we suddenly (and often without warning !) we meet someone who ~ for the first time ~ blows away the cobwebs and makes us feel really alive ~ it's called LOVE ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
Thank you so much Brian! I totally agree with you. I think young people give a new idea and fresh feeling on love and relationships. I appreciate your kind words thank you.
Katy, you perfectly captured that feeling of euphoria one gets when falling in love. Great poem!
Thank you so much!
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