his breath
Slides down her leg
From her knee to her thigh
Where heat meets moisture and she moans
He touches her softness and the heat grows
Together they move as one soul
Her pleasure overtakes
His animal
Now tame
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Author:
Mugsdaddy (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Hope I still know how to count.
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Counts okay to me M. Strictly the first two syllables and the last two should be the same but otherwise a darn good write.
Nobody told me the rules. I I'll give it another go later. Thanks for the input.
Mugsdaddy
Great writing, Mugsdaddy! And since I can only count to three, I did not bother checking your count! 🙂
Very sensual poem, beautifully erotic! Just have an anatomy question: How do you slide 'down' from knee to thigh?
Easiest way is to use the tongue.
I knew that, duh! But don't you have to slide 'up'? 🙂 🙂
Am just kidding around! I do love your poem!
Not when she's on her back and her knees are up in the air then you're going down literally
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