Tasty Prey (Rictameter)

Mugsdaddy

his breath 

Slides down her leg

From her knee to her thigh 

Where heat meets moisture and she moans 

 He touches her softness and the heat grows 

Together they move as one soul 

Her pleasure overtakes 

His animal 

Now tame 

  • Author: Mugsdaddy (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 27th, 2017 04:57
  • Comment from author about the poem: Hope I still know how to count.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Michael Edwards

    Counts okay to me M. Strictly the first two syllables and the last two should be the same but otherwise a darn good write.

    • Mugsdaddy

      Nobody told me the rules. I I'll give it another go later. Thanks for the input.
      Mugsdaddy

    • FredPeyer

      Great writing, Mugsdaddy! And since I can only count to three, I did not bother checking your count! 🙂
      Very sensual poem, beautifully erotic! Just have an anatomy question: How do you slide 'down' from knee to thigh?

      • Mugsdaddy

        Easiest way is to use the tongue.

        • FredPeyer

          I knew that, duh! But don't you have to slide 'up'? 🙂 🙂
          Am just kidding around! I do love your poem!

          • Mugsdaddy

            Not when she's on her back and her knees are up in the air then you're going down literally



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