Rose peddle

Natalie Heisey

every night I smelt the roses you gave to me

I cherished every leaf on them now I cherish every 

Peddle that crumbles an falls

Back then I thought our true love would never end

Now its shattered glass so thin to walk on

I hated the pain you caused my heart 

Now as I sit here alone an stare at the roses it makes me go insane knowing your gone 

But then again its so sweet to know you faded away like a shadow in the wind

An no more pain causing my heart to bleed but you created my soul to stay in the dark

An that's alright as long as were apart ill sit on my swing with a nice little smirk 

  • Author: Natalie Heisey (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 27th, 2017 09:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: This poem is dark sad n deep its a person who cherish every moment with u but at the same time crashes every moment of happiness I just wrote this lastnight this is one of my favs I ever wrote
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 19
  • Users favorite of this poem: Sunflowers Bloom
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  • Sunflowers Bloom

    I really, really reeeaallyy liked this poem. I felt it. so deep and so pure, honest. It kind of shaked me and I also feel its because I can relate some kind of way. true soul speaking. I loved it

    • Natalie Heisey

      Thank you everyone on my FB page wanted me to post this here usually I never share my any of my,poetry but,now I am going to start I have books of poems to post when I get the chance

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      WELCOME NAT ~ Thanks for your first POEM an elegant write but a sad sad tale ! It happens to all of us ~ in LIFE & LOVE ~ one way and another ~ so we can emphasise as SUNFLOWERS has already indicated. ROSES always speak of LOVE but it is sad when the peddles fall and crumble. Things and relationships we once considered PERMANENT ~ become TRANSIENT and fade and die ! MEN always say "Better to have loved & lost than never to have loved at all" but it seems harder for Ladies. Thanks for sharing & caring ~ YOURS BRIAN (UK)

      • Natalie Heisey

        Thanks for taking the time,to read my,poem I look forward to sharing more,on here soon 🙂



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