The Darkness has its hold on me
Every time I am set free and start to fly I am Visciously
tugged by its chain
I am Held Down by darkness
Sadness, guilt
It's so painful
I could break free if I cut My Wings, but I'd only fall on
my face attempting to fly away
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Author:
MereGolden (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 27th, 2017 21:03
- Category: Sad
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Comments3
Keep the wings and fix your gaze on the light. Nice expression. I'll mention NAMI for your readers who are standing on the cliff of genuine hopelessness.
Very nice first poem! Welcome to MPS! I love the last two lines, very good! I hope you stay and write more, as you obviously write very well. Great job!
Welcome GOLDEN ~ Thanks for your First Poem full of tension ! I could break the CHAIN for you Sweetheart and then you would be free to fly wherever you heart takes you ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ thanks B
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