Still macabre silence,
In undulating darkness,
Looms the lonely soul
Shuddering in the cold.
Dithering on escape,
Save love's disdain.
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Author:
Ravenssongbird (
Offline) - Published: September 28th, 2017 00:05
- Category: Reflection
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Comments4
You word desolation so poetically well -- welcome Raven to MPS.
Thank you! Great to be here 😊
WELCOME RAVEN ~ Thanks for your first poem which pulsates with DESOLATION ! Those of us who are 30+ (34) have been there in Life & Love and your word selection is an apt description. As one gets older one becomes more resilient ~ but it still hurts. Thinking of you ~ BRIAN (UK)
Thank you so much, Brian! I really appreciate your response 😀
Very nice piece! I still marvel how so few sentences can say more than entire paragraphs sometimes.
Thank you! 😄
Great wtite Raven. This a very descriptive poem about those nights of irreconcilable sleep. Read my poem Regrets please. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you 😊
You bet!
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