Desolation

Ravenssongbird

Still macabre silence,

In undulating darkness,

Looms the lonely soul

Shuddering in the cold.

Dithering on escape, 

Save love's disdain.

 

 

  • Author: Ravenssongbird (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 28th, 2017 00:05
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 42
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  • Fay Slimm.

    You word desolation so poetically well -- welcome Raven to MPS.

    • Ravenssongbird

      Thank you! Great to be here 😊

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      WELCOME RAVEN ~ Thanks for your first poem which pulsates with DESOLATION ! Those of us who are 30+ (34) have been there in Life & Love and your word selection is an apt description. As one gets older one becomes more resilient ~ but it still hurts. Thinking of you ~ BRIAN (UK)

      • Ravenssongbird

        Thank you so much, Brian! I really appreciate your response 😀

      • Azura Nightsong

        Very nice piece! I still marvel how so few sentences can say more than entire paragraphs sometimes.

      • rrodriguez

        Great wtite Raven. This a very descriptive poem about those nights of irreconcilable sleep. Read my poem Regrets please. Thanks for sharing.



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