Please tell me

rrodriguez

Please tell me
where are you
where can I find you
where I can look
where can I run

Please tell me
are you far, far as the sky
where my eyes are fixed
looking for your
refulgent blue eyes

Please tell me
if I look at the sun
will I be blinded
by your resplendent face
where your eyes are like flames

Please tell me
if is in the universe
where your tender look
is in the depth of space
with sweet rosy lips

Please tell me
if it's on the moon
from where I hear
the softness of your voice
to search there for you

Please tell me
which shooting star
to chase and stop
because on it goes
the love of my life

  • Author: rrodriguez (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 30th, 2017 12:00
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this poem in Spanish so when I translated it to English, the translation was off. But it so happened that as I fixed the poem, it took a personality of its own. I worked at it and this is the result.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 42
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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Comments4

  • FredPeyer

    Roberto, if the translation is that good, the original must be excellent! Unfortunately I don't understand enough Spanish to enjoy it!

  • Accidental Poet

    The search for love always brings out the best in us all. Wonderful write Robert. ; )

  • WL Schuett

    Enjoyed this love poem

  • Goldfinch60

    Beautiful lovelorn write Roberto.

    • rrodriguez

      Thank you Gold...



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