The Arch-Angel (not a poem)

Mugsdaddy

blood dripped from his talons as he looked across the Battlefield. His fallen Brothers their once perfect forms now torn and broken this was his fault he had allowed himself to be taken in by the succubus and then betrayed hundreds of his brothers to her wicked will. He was her first her technique unperfected left a piece of him behind. Unlike the others who were just Mindless Beasts of Destruction as he scolded himself for bringing the end to such a beautiful existence with violence and rage. Suddenly the sky erupted in flames Lucifer's fiery thrown moved across the sky pulled by hundreds of red scaly cherubs the shiny black horns and black bat wings A Testament to the evil lineage he tried to look away but alas it was too late there she was his goddess the succubus chained to Lucifer's  throne. He once again found himself enthralled by her beauty and he found himself wanting she was his goddess she was his mistress she was his first love his claws dripping with blood he fell to his knees and wept . Lucifer a terrible task master backhanded the succubus for no reason other than it brought him pleasure a low growl from deep inside her Escaped. Lucifer smiled and Drew back his hand to strike her again. 

Without thought Azazel launched himself into the air unlike the other unhallowed his wings carried him fast on the Wind before Lucifer's hand could find its mark Azazel landed the Demonic blow with such force it nearly threw Lucifer from his throne but before he could land his final blow the dark lord struck him hard in the chest he struck the ground with such Force that the already dead bodies which lay there were scattered for dozens of yards Azazel went to rise and they were on him swarm of tiny devilish cherubs biting and tearing at his skin their numbers were overwhelming. 

He took a breath and then stepped into them with all the rage and fury of a hurricane his claws slashing through them as if they were the only the wind itself the Skirmish came to an end quite abruptly as the tiny demons realized they were highly outclassed 

Thunderous laughter rang out as a flaming chain closed the distance between them so quick that Azazel had no time to react. It struck him hard in the neck as it closed around his throat the devil laughed again as he twisted the chain tighter around his throat, Azazel saw the Succubus from the corner of his eye and she broke herself free from Lucifer's throne. As his eyes Began to close he thought at least she will have gotten away. Just then he heard a tremendous crash the succubus had not run away but instead joined the fight. The chain fell from his neck as Lucifer had to abandon it to defend himself against the succubuses formidable attack.

"Enough"! The devil struck her hard driving her back to the ground he withdrew a large black sword from out of his skin "This ends now"

Unlike the other unhallowed his wings carried him fast on the Wind, something of him still remained inside it was his love for her so strong he would die for her if he must.

The devil's blade came down fast but Azazel was faster moving with reaction rather than thought he sought put himself between the blade and his love but once again he was changed he stood once again perfect in form thrusting a flaming sword out to protect his loved one. Satan stepped back giving room to this new creature that stood before him.

Azazel towered over the succubus he reached out his hand "Come my Love", "Are you to be my new master"?  He smiled down at her "I am your King and you my Queen. " she looked at his new form drapped in crimson and gold with Wings made of blood she smiled and asked "What form of creature are you"?

Answering as if he had always known he simply said, "I am the first Arch-Angel."

  • Author: Mugsdaddy (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 1st, 2017 11:20
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments3

  • Mugsdaddy

    Thank you but your story is far better and so well written mine pales in comparison.

  • Michael Edwards

    Well crafted Mugsdaddy

    • Mugsdaddy

      Thank you so much Mr. E, I know that this is not your cup of tea so thank you very much for your kind words and support.
      Mugsdaddy

    • FredPeyer

      An interesting and exciting tale full of twists and turns! You and Martina seem both to descend to the underworld here!
      Great writing, good tension, great subject!

      • Mugsdaddy

        We are seeing who will make it to Hell first.



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