I'm an eccedentesiast
I make it look the easiest
I'm one giant fake smile
It might take awhile
Can you tell
I'm not well
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Author:
Niecey (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 2nd, 2017 17:51
- Comment from author about the poem: My first poem. There will be more, I just needed to let some steam off.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments1
WELCOME CHENISE ~ thanks for your first poem ! I Like the Structure ~ Three rhyming couplets ~ my favorite form of verse. The Subject makes one pause for thought ! ECCEDENTESTIAST One who wears a False Smile to hide their PAIN. We all do that from time to time so we are empathetic to what you say " No need for a False Smile on MPS we accept you jut a you are ~ next Poem please. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Pleas check my Poem ~ Hot Air Balloon ~ Thanks B.
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