chenise_jade

What's underneath

I'm an eccedentesiast

I make it look the easiest 

I'm one giant fake smile

It might take awhile

Can you tell

I'm not well

 

 

 

Comments1

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME CHENISE ~ thanks for your first poem ! I Like the Structure ~ Three rhyming couplets ~ my favorite form of verse. The Subject makes one pause for thought ! ECCEDENTESTIAST One who wears a False Smile to hide their PAIN. We all do that from time to time so we are empathetic to what you say " No need for a False Smile on MPS we accept you jut a you are ~ next Poem please. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Pleas check my Poem ~ Hot Air Balloon ~ Thanks B.



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