Show me what you've got
Where the imagination plays
With that insight I'm lost in space
To awe in wonder as it relates
Taking mine to place its never been
The words flowing through my being
I rhyme in side more than I write
It's going every second to my life
The way it helps everything flow
To let all out through a rhythmic mode
Once you get in you can lose the skin
Nothing but words of the mind begin
Whatever you create that resonates
Becomes a part of what I vibrate.
My oldest son from another wagwan
Told me it's called "Dan syndrome"
I think we all have the flow from within
Expressing what you feel, no hesitating
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Reading your great poem, PD, I vibrated right along with you! And I do think you could expand the 'Dan syndrome' to a 'Writers syndrome'
Bless you my friend, you may of guessed that I do struggle with the writing side, verbal communication is easier but my true passion is in just Energies and body language. So much more simple and pleasant 😉
Thank you for joining me and helping me reprogramme myself through yours and others work!
Great write Dan! I loved the Cheyenne saying in the beginning. Also the last two lines of your poem is so true! Thanks for sharing this write with us!
It called out to me and even made me pick up the bongos and have a play. I'm so glad it resonated with your amazing soul
Thank you Dan! What a nice thing to say!
Good write, we all need to write what is within us.
Indeed we do, thank you.
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