People don't feel my pain
And sometimes neither do I
Heart-aching has me overtaking
Over-thinking while I'm being patience
I'm talking about my future, that's if I make it
I just want to live free and spiritually everyday
My heart is broken, well not all the way
But when I get to thinking, my thoughts run deeper than space
Sad to say, I just hope my life don't turn out in the wrong way
I feel alone
To be honest I am alone
I show people mad love
But somehow still treated wrong
I'm dying inside and can't fake it
Deep down, there's a dark path with no exit
But being with you till the end of time
That is a beautiful exit for me
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Author:
Swavey (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Being lost and feeling down through life, but ending up finding that one person / thing that gives you hope.
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That one person can bring you out from the depths in which you find yourself. Keep reaching for them, that person will bring you into the light. Welcome to MPS.
I find great wit in your opening couplet:
People don't feel my pain
And sometimes neither do I
The first line is something we all say to ourselves... the second one, well, we don't express it quite so perfectly. We say we cover our pain up, put on a brave face, bite our lip... but ... what you said! Nice. We don't feel it but it's there.
thank you
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