FredPeyer

White Lie

It started as a careless little white lie

Morphing into a major confrontation

The way an elephant is made of a fly

The way a speech can rattle a nation

 

Later-on, after much heated discussion

Having forgotten the little lie completely

But still reeling under the repercussion

It was finally decided to end it discreetly

Comments11

  • Louis Gibbs

    This can't be a reference to the current political stage, a such situations aren't ended discreetly that I've noticed. At any rate, an intriguing poem, Fred!

    • FredPeyer

      Thanks Louis, you are right, I don't think it is political, but otherwise wide open to the readers interpretation.

    • Goldfinch60

      Good write, the problem with lying is that you have to remember which lie you have told and memory can fail.

      • FredPeyer

        Thanks, Goldfinch! Ah, if we could remember every lie we told. But sometimes a little lie turns into something much greater.....

      • orchidee

        A fine write Fred. Unfortunately my white lie has gone too far. I only said originally 'I would like to marry KP'. doh! heehee.

        • FredPeyer

          Thanks orchidee, and see where it got you. Now we are already talking about having kids with KP! Well, maybe they will do good at Halloween!

          • Santita

            LMAO!
            They cannot have kids until after the wedding! I am already up to my ears in wedding planning; seeing as Orchi is too busy with his complaining!

          • Martina Lynch

            Great short edit Fred, interesting subject, 'lies' especially the ones we tell ourselves.

            • FredPeyer

              Thanks Martina, when I wrote this I did not think about lies we tell ourselves, but thinking about it now, you do have a point!
              This is what is so great about these open ended 'shorties', one never knows where they will lead us.

            • Angel G

              Ah yes.. how quickly our "white lies" have a snowball effect. Just keeps rolling and rolling into one big, fluffy, white puff of trouble! The comforting part is everyone has done it Fred! White lie members unite ;) ❤️❤️

              • FredPeyer

                Thanks so much, Angel, and welcome to the club! Yes, we all did and do it. Sometimes it works, sometimes it backfires. But you know what? A lie is a lie, no matter what.

              • Fay Slimm

                A relationship build on a lie cannot be but ended - finished discreetly as the verse says is the better way Fred methinks.

                • FredPeyer

                  Thanks Fay, you are absolutely right. But I think there are cases where one of the partners lies about something inconsequential, which is then blown out of proportion.

                • WL Schuett

                  So much truth in a poem about lies , good poem

                  • FredPeyer

                    Thanks so much WL!

                  • Santita

                    Great write, Fred. Important too, depending upon the situation a white lie can really destroy something/someone. I think there are circumstances when people tell white lies unaware of what might become of them. A thought-provoking write.

                    • FredPeyer

                      Thanks Santi, no matter the color, a lie is a lie. And relationships are based on honesty. So you are right, a small lie can end up as a big problem. If it is real love, then that's when the 'forgive/forget' comes in!

                    • Antonio Valetoria

                      Perfectly constructed, and rhymed brillantly prosed. I think this one of my favorites among your work. Your words create a dark mirror for self reflection and thought.
                      The most dangerous are the ones the teller believes...are truth

                      • FredPeyer

                        Thank you Antonio! You are so right about the dangerous ones. How does the saying go exactly? If you tell yourself something long enough it becomes true? And how about lying to oneself? I think that is the worst kind of lie.

                        • Antonio Valetoria

                          I think the worst lies are the ones told by others that you want so desperately to believe are true

                        • lasergraph

                          One should never lie if he can't remember what it was, that is one reason I don't. No memory for it.

                          • FredPeyer

                            Thank you lasergraph! Very good advice!

                          • tepo

                            competition to find the best liar
                            winners statement
                            i don't tell lies
                            very interesting read
                            ta

                            • FredPeyer

                              Thanks tepo! All you have to do for that competition is find some golfers and some fishermen!



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