Crossed Wires.
Always gyrating, deplete from neediness
sad relationships zigzag between circuits
of in-complete spheres that rotating feed
spirals of high-crossed wires by inserting
charged breaks in partner-resolves. Bent
on pivotal lack a shock can reel at vortex
and begin knock-back swerving by meant
uncaring detours around known shortage
in deficient instalment - for commitment
to defective love reaps force turned bitter.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: October 14th, 2017 04:05
- Comment from author about the poem: Just a bit of weekend reflection after viewing the image.
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Comments5
Fay, this seems to be a departure from your usual writing, but I like it!
Yes Fay, entanglements of points of view can be a breeding ground for disruption of peaceful waters. Great writing Fay. ; )
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ~ Using a "block" presentation gives it a poignancy the content justifies. In our communities we are all cross linked ~ Family ~ Work ~ Community ~ Church etc. Life & Love affects everyone in our web ! Love the poem ~ it made me think. MPS is of course one such network ! Love the picture it resonated with my muse as well ! Your as ever BRIAN
Very good melding of poem to picture , well done Fay
Yes, fine write Fay. I thought similar things when I saw some abstracts at an art show.
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