Your wee mate


Have you ever felt you're dangling between life and death itself

Well that is the current state of my astonishing poor health

I know im under house arrest with all the hours in the day

But i have this flipping writers block, i seem to have lost my way

I really miss writing and reading and all of you lovely guys

So i've just popped on thismorning for a wee surprise 

Sending all my love and hugs, i hope you all are doing great

A little quiet stranger poet,  it's me Renzi your wee mate ๐Ÿ’“


  • Author: Renzi Mars (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 14th, 2017 05:37
  • Comment from author about the poem: ๐Ÿ’“ love and light my fellow poets xo
  • Category: Short story
  • Views: 39


  • Louis Gibbs

    You travel a difficult trail this lifetime, sweet and talented one! At war with the body you inhabit. My heart goes out to you, Renzi.

    • Renzi

      Never ending battle isnt it. Ahhhhh! All my love to you louis๐Ÿ’“

    • Christina8

      Hi Renzi! You wrote a fine poem. I do hope you feel better! Glad to see you on this morning!

      • Renzi

        Thankyou Christina ๐Ÿ’“ lovely to hear from you is all with you? Xo

        • Christina8

          Very well, thanks for asking!

        • orchidee

          Get well soon. Maybe you are going through a withdrawing phase, with your health matter. I'm no expert in it. And now you've written another fine poem!

          • Renzi

            Perhaps a little๐Ÿ™ƒ and i think the copious anounts of alcohol was keeping the weight stable them bam .. dropped like no tomorrow๐Ÿ™ˆ but hey onwards and upwards and lots of bed rest โค

          • FredPeyer

            Welcome back Renzi! It is so good to see and read from you again. You know, writers block is only a figment of the imagination. Doesn't really exist. Your post proves it!
            Hope you get better soon. I know it is a never ending battle, but fight it you must!

            • Renzi

              Awk my good friend๐Ÿ’“ how are you? All well i hope! All this bed rest.. fantasizing about my next holiday haha! The battle needs to be won.. renzi needs to liveeee ๐Ÿค—

            • Goldfinch60

              Well your words are still there Renzi, i sincerely hope that we will be reading many more of them.

              • Renzi

                Love and hugs my lovely ๐Ÿ’“ reading all your lovely work will give me inspiration. I know it x

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