I eagerly await that day,
When I can sit down
On a rusty bench
In an unkept
Or perhaps prim garden,
When I can lay
On top of tall
Blades of dewy grass
In a forgotten field,
When I can stand
At the peak of a
Proud mountain,
The gale lifting my hair and spirits,
And close my eyes;
Simply sighing to myself
In utter contentment,
Because finally,
Life has fallen into place.
- Author: YoungAndNaive (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: October 16th, 2017 15:32
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 30
- Users favorite of this poem: FredPeyer
Comments3
That it will writing this way.
Inspirational words, nice job
Thank you!
Y&N, I had to make this a favorite. It is well written, but it is the subject and especially the last stanza that got me!
Aww thank you so much! 🙂
Had to read more of your work. There is a certain naivety about it which is so captivating and which many strive to achieve and fail. I look forward to reading more in the future.
Thank you so much!
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