Louis Gibbs

TOO BAD

 

"They showed such promise,

Came so close ...

 

On the very brink of making it

To the next level.

 

So much for that experiment!

Too bad.

 

Let's see now ...

What to create next?"

  • Author: Louis Gibbs (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 18th, 2017 00:00
  • Comment from author about the poem: This wry poem is completely open to interpretation as to who is creating what, and why. There are no wrong interpretations ... enjoy!
  • Category: Humor
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Comments5

  • Wallace

    Enjoyable creation, nice write.

  • Goldfinch60

    You have created this poem, good write.

    • Louis Gibbs

      Indeed I have. Thanks, Goldie.

    • WL Schuett

      My life in a nutshell ... so close ... nope ....on to the next ...cool poem 😎

      • Louis Gibbs

        Thanks so much, WL. I appreciate your comment.

      • Christina8

        Good write! This is exactly how I write my poetry....lol. 2 out of 3 poems never make it to the publish button!

        • Louis Gibbs

          Ah, a poet who is discriminating as to what she publishes. Congratulations, and thanks for your input, Christina!

        • FredPeyer

          Louis, the way I see this poem, the who, what and why is not relevant. The poem tells me not to give up, to keep on going, to see failure as an opportunity, to learn from past mistakes.
          Very well written, like it a lot!

          • Louis Gibbs

            Your interpretation and thoughts are very much appreciated, Fred. Wise comments, my friend!



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