They seem to be with you,
With you all the time,
The weight of problems.
Those problems seem to increase,
They start to push you,
Push you into a life of work and stress.
Just stop and think though.
Why do you let your problems push you
Into a lifetime of darkness?
When your dreams can lead you,
Into a lifetime of light.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Let your dreams lead you to the summit of your life.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments5
Makes sense. It's always seeing the glass half empty, I suppose, is what we may often do. Good write Gold.
Wish I had followed my dreams in 1066. I only caused problems. You know - cos you was there too!
No the glass is always half full.
Love the write. Very sage advice!
Thank you Christina, most kind.
We would all live a better life if we could always follow our dreams , but that’s just a dream . Great poem very positive and uplifting
Thank you WL, it may just be a dream but it is something to aim for.
i guess we can choose our destiny in a way,at least through our thoughts
Very true Ron, in our mind we can go anywhere.
Why, indeed, Goldfinch. Too many people just walk in that rut they call life, instead of soaring above.
Thought provoking write, well done!
Thank you Fred, much appreciated.
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