My heart hurts for no reason
It feels like it has lost a piece
That's what depression feels like
No easy way to make it cease
Nothing has happened. No
cataclysmic heartbreak here
But tell that to my heart
Who feels such a painful little tear
It's hard being affected so easily
Because I have everything I need
Sometimes it feels overwhelming
And advice from friends I do heed
After all the writes I read, I know
I'm a lucky woman for sure
Because my heart could never be broken
I'll continue like this, because I will endure.
No, I will overcome!
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 18th, 2017 06:48
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Yes, you will Christina! Hang in there! There were many days I’d cry myself to sleep when I was raising my family! It wasn’t easy...but it all worked out! Be strong! Everything will be ok!
I appreciate your kind words. Certainly isn't easy. But most of my poems are happy, a few slip through like todays. But I thank you for everything!
Yes, you are a very positive person! We all have a bad day once in a while! Have a great day!
Yes you will and have overcome , good strong poem , very positive writing, love it
Thanks so much, Bill! I appreciate your wonderful comments and compliment!
You are strong Christina as can be seen from your poems, sometimes though we all have days when sadness enters our lives but be assured it will soon become happy again.
Thanks so much GF! I know what you say is true. I appreciate the read and the lovely reply!
A fine write C. I see it is 'tear' as in weeping, to rhyme with 'here'. Yet it may also be 'tear' in the sense of ripping.
Yes I struggled with that but left it. Thanks for the read and compliment!
I agree with Santita...
You're such a powerful woman. Sweet, caring, strong. Your words say a lot about you. Thank you for sharing. Stay strong.
Thanks for your kind words! Yeah, I guess depression is more than just a bad day. Thanks for the kind compliments. I appreciate them!
Christina, I'm taken aback... wow! But like you say, you'll overcome. In fact, the Bible says that we're more than conquerors. Be blessed! I invite you to read my latest prose poem.
I just read your poem! Great! Thanks for the read and advice! Much appreciated!
Thank you for sharing and displaying your strength for the many who are suffering from depression xxx
I appreciate your kind reply. I think it's important to show your weaknesses/strengths to help others. Thanks for the read!
you will overcome
Thanks ron! Appreciate the vote of confidence! 🙂
you`re welcome
This poem filled me with such strength Christina 🙂 thank you for sharing!
Thank you skye! I appreciate your optimism and your wonderful reply to my poem!
Christina, none of us can be perfectly happy everyday. We all share your pain and feelings. So please know that you are among friends here at MPS. You can reach out to most of us I'm sure. But when life has you feeling down, God hears you too. And don't be afraid to write about it, sometimes that's the best way to bounce back. Works for me anyway. ; )
Thanks AP for your support and encouragement! Very much appreciated! Thanks for reading and understanding. I appreciate your very kind reply and your favorite save. It made me very happy to see your in depth note. 🙂
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