Submerge in eternal bliss

Poetic Dan

I see and feel the light from your soul

Inspirational thoughts start to flow

New realities are built in admiration of reflection

Knowing my purpose is to learn from your creation

To no longer feel left behind, knowing I'm getting there in my own time.

Because within the awe of your eyes, I see you have placed me where I've placed you.

That means we're actually all at the same pace

We can let go and submerge in the eternal bliss of being completely ourselves!

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 20th, 2017 12:49
  • Comment from author about the poem: This was inspired by a chat with a friend and the picture she left us. This was a moment of bliss in my mind, is it still there? Only time will tell. One thing for sure is, I felt it a few times over the years so I guess it's knowing it's possible to feel it. If not for good at least just for a moment.
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  • Christina8

    What a sweet picture and poem. Love it! Hold on to that eternal bliss!

    • Poetic Dan

      As should you my lovely, thank very much. It's the little things!

    • Fay Slimm.

      Wishing that bliss stays with you from now and forever my friend - a most beautiful read.

      • Poetic Dan

        As to you, and thank you for helping me put more in the disruption. Your perfectly you 😉

      • Goldfinch60

        Good write, we always need to be ourselves.



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