Say Something

Naeners

She sits as her eyes glaze

A bright mind going to waste

And if she had the nerve

She'd say something

  • Author: Naeners (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 22nd, 2017 00:31
  • Comment from author about the poem: Super short poem, sorry bout that. Please tell me what you think, constructive criticism is always welcomed.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 19
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  • Michael Edwards

    No need to apologise about it's length - it's quality that counts and this has it. It's a super piece of work. The only thing I'd do with it if it were mine would be to add a bit of punctuation and in doing so do away with some of the capitals. However this is a personal matter and other poets may well disagree.

  • FredPeyer

    Naeners, Michael is right. I do love shorties that say a lot between the lines, have a lot of meaning and hidden 'treasures' and leave a lot to the readers imagination. Your poem is just perfect! And I guess that bright mind is yours!



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