Notice of absence from g.poet
I will be off here for a week because I am going on a trip to Hawaii !!!
I will be off here for a week because I am going on a trip to Hawaii !!!
We live in a place,
where we feel such disgrace,
and we can't even live to face,
what we need to brace,
Trapped in a loop of endless beginnings and never endings,
stuck in a place,
wanting to leave but can't even breathe,
can't even see what we need,
at loss of our words because we aren't sure,
it's all just a big blur...
- g.
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g.poet (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is one of my first poems ever written, I will be posting better one's soon!!
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WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first poem ! Lovely to read and recite bursting with Rhyme & Rhythm like all good poems should ~ more please ! I enjoyed the theme ! For most of us Daily Life(Monday to Friday) is one big blur ~ but I love weekends ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
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