I touch the sky,
Breathing on the earth underneath
My knees get weak
Filling the water in my cup
Half empty it feels,
Never full of life
The darkness surrounds me
Greed fills my house of sorrow
Broken bones dead light
A house whom never awakens
Bleeding of feeling
a girl Full of light
But is destine for darkness
I don’t understand
And I what to get out
But who am I
Just a girl
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Author:
cassandra14 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: hello my name is cassandra in 23 years old just started to get into poetry . i would love for some feedback on my poems ,thank you (:
- Category: Spiritual
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Comments1
There is obviously light within you and that light will always overcome the darkness - just look for the light.
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