That "perfect guy" comes around
once in a blue moon.
He's the guy who
Bites his lip
after checking you out.
Tells you he likes you.
Smells Versace cologne.
He's the guy who
Gets lost in your stormy eyes.
Let's you run into his strong arms
when you are scared.
Makes you laugh
when you're crying.
He's the guy who
Makes you feel like
the only girl in the world.
Tells you everything
will be okay.
Gives you a Blue Orchid mimicking his eyes.
Hugs you from behind.
Gets nervous around you,
when mentioning a kiss.
He's the guy who
Melts your heart with his melodic voice.
He's the guy who
Teaches you by getting behind you and caressing your hand.
He's the guy who
Is taller than you,
and you like that.
He's the guy who
Adores you for you.
He's the guy who completes you,
That "perfect guy”
only comes around
once in a blue moon.
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Author:
M.E.M. (
Offline) - Published: October 25th, 2017 17:58
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Comments4
I think you did a great job! You painted a picture with your words I like that.
Thank you for your input. Always happy to hear how people perceive a poem
Perfect job describing the man that I married...well besides the blue eyes! LOL. Kidding aside, this is a well written poem! Great job!
Great job! I wrote a piece similar to this when I was 15. But I wrote it towards the opposite direction. I wrote it about a guy that was a player. I wish I could get back that journal. My grandma accidentally threw it away, while cleaning house.
M.E.M., this guy sounds just about perfect! I do like your poem, well written, has a nice flow and great structure.
And you are right, a guy like that does come only around once in a blue moon, which kind of means never? Tone it down a bit and take the next one on the list! 🙂
I did actually look up blue moon, quite interesting. You should look into it as well
Thanks M.E.M., got it. You will meet a guy like that roughly every three to four years. And in the meantime I guess you will have to do with whatever else is available! 🙂
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