Pride

M.E.M.

Stand tall for you are a power!

Raised above all others you hold answers

Followers praise you, others envy your intellect

Don’t be afraid fragile one I’m here,

Protecting you weaklings is what I do.

Taking pride in what you hold dear.

No one can tear you down now.

  • Author: M.E.M. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 27th, 2017 10:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: Based on the sin of Pride. Notice how it's written
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 26
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  • FredPeyer

    M.E.M., maybe it's my eyes, but as the blind man said: I see, I can't see anything.
    I do like the poem though, especially the two lines 'Don't be afraid...' and 'Protecting you...'

    • M.E.M.

      Pride is one of the seven sins. So... 7 words within 7 lines

      • FredPeyer

        Thank you! Never thought of it, but now that opened my eyes .....

      • orchidee

        Ahh, good write to get 7 lines, each with 7 words! And similar to what Cat says, "I" is in the centre of PRIDE. Erm, so it in sIn too. Hmmm.

        • M.E.M.

          Oh! That's cool. I didn't know that



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