Stand tall for you are a power!
Raised above all others you hold answers
Followers praise you, others envy your intellect
Don’t be afraid fragile one I’m here,
Protecting you weaklings is what I do.
Taking pride in what you hold dear.
No one can tear you down now.
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Author:
M.E.M. (
Offline) - Published: October 27th, 2017 10:50
- Comment from author about the poem: Based on the sin of Pride. Notice how it's written
- Category: Reflection
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M.E.M., maybe it's my eyes, but as the blind man said: I see, I can't see anything.
I do like the poem though, especially the two lines 'Don't be afraid...' and 'Protecting you...'
Pride is one of the seven sins. So... 7 words within 7 lines
Thank you! Never thought of it, but now that opened my eyes .....
Ahh, good write to get 7 lines, each with 7 words! And similar to what Cat says, "I" is in the centre of PRIDE. Erm, so it in sIn too. Hmmm.
Oh! That's cool. I didn't know that
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