REFLECTIONS ON OBSERVATIONS

Louis Gibbs

What defines us?

Or more specifically ...

What have we chosen to define our lives?

 

To some, their experience in the military

Was the defining moment of their life.

To some, it was a traumatic event

Experienced in childhood.

 

It could be a great achievement

In their practiced career ...

The loss of a relationship,

Or the death of a child.

 

I think we'll be surprised to learn

It wasn't those 'big' moments at all,

But random 'insignificant'

Small acts of kindness

Forgotten about.

 

  • Author: Louis Gibbs (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 30th, 2017 00:00
  • Comment from author about the poem: We'll see!
  • Category: Reflection
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  • Goldfinch60

    This is very true, those small acts of kindness can be so meaningful throughout our lives.

    • Louis Gibbs

      Possibly the most meaningful. Thanks for your thoughts, Goldie!

    • orchidee

      Probably the small things, I reckon! Reminds of the widow's mite. Seems completely useless, humanly speaking, to put two mites in a 'collection' box, yet it was the quality, not the quantity that mattered. A fine write Louis.

      • Louis Gibbs

        I absolutely agree, 'O', and I appreciate your thoughts!

      • Fay Slimm.

        The value of random acts of kindness so well outlined in this tribute to taking time for reflection Louis - a very good read.

        • Louis Gibbs

          Thank you my wise friend. Your input is appreciated, as always.

        • Tony36

          Great write

          • Louis Gibbs

            Thanks for reading, Tony.

            • Tony36

              Welcome

            • FredPeyer

              Great food for thought in this so well written poem, Louis. I have come to depend on your 'eye-openers'! The first stanza stopped me. Don't think I have an answer, maybe because of what you say in your last stanza.

              • Louis Gibbs

                Yes, I feel strongly the our perspectives will shift considerably in retrospect. Thanks so much for your thoughts on this, Fred!



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