First day back without your gift
My shores are bleak with emotionless
Always awaiting for the tide to come in
Memories of moments to never forget
To be told by a stranger how polite and calm you wait
Shows this world with its labels, should think again
The goodness inside you shines so bright
With the energy of your magical hugs
A smile that can light the darkest of days
You being you makes this a better place
Every second that goes by, I hope this society does not affect or make you hide the greatness that changed my life.
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: It is what it is. Just finished a week with just my son as his sister was with grandparents.
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Comments5
Ahhh, worthy pride in a fine poem and son!
Much appreciated
Wonderful tribute to your son!! What a great dad you are--beaming with pride! Awesome!
So much so it sprinkles from my eyes 😉 just wish that could feel what I lose when he's gone.
great write, Poetic Dan.
Much appreciated dear friend.
Super write Dan.
For a super lad 😉
Dan, riding along on a bike like that I would have the same grin on my face! Love the picture, great kid, and as a father of three who was Mr. Mom a lot (my wife worked as a flight attendant), I know exactly how you feel. Great poem!
Thank you my Good friend, and may I say if you and your lovely mate it the whole way, you have my up most respect. It's not easy to go through I raising of children but I understand more now, that we are all just to doing the best that we can.
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