She appeared in my life
Like a dream
One day I was content
The next was hell
I wanted her
Had to have her
Could not live
Without her
My prayers were
Answered
As she came to me
The most beautiful
Woman I had ever seen
We made love
All night long
By morning she was
Gone
Taking with her
My innocence
My sanity
And my future
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Author:
Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 4th, 2017 00:34
- Category: Love
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Comments7
What a very good write Fred, did she ever come back?
Thanks, Goldfinch! I think it is up to me since she only exists in my imagination. Have to think about it. Maybe I'll bring her back in the future.
thought you were writing about your first time.great write
Thanks mugsdaddy! I guess this was the first and last time!
A fine write Fred. I wish she (KP) would go from my life. No chance! lol.
thanks orchidee, but think, she might take your dignity, innocence, sanity, and future as well with her! Are you willing to give all that up?
Orchi, divorce is a costly thing. You\'re gonna have to give up something.
Great write Fred.
Love the story within this poem!!
Thank you Shannon, there is always a story, isn't it. There is always meaning between the lines and it is up to the reader to use his/her imagination.
Ah, the power of an alluring woman to destroy a good man. Well portrayed here, Fred! Good write.
Thanks Louis, how good that man was is debatable. He was ready for a one-night stand, throwing caution to the wind....
Nice Fred , I think everyone could relate to this poem .....
Thanks WL, I am sure a lot of us can. I left a lot to the imagination of the reader.
Wonderful write Fred!
Thank you, skye, for reading and commenting.
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